Review – Good Reasons by Elaine L. Jones

For those students who have no idea what an argument is, why they should learn to write an argument, or how to go about writing an argument, they can find the answers to all of these questions in Good Reasons.  While this book is geared for the novice argument writer, the text still has enough information to be of interest to the more experienced writer.  The suggested tasks are innovative and inspiring for students and teachers alike.

Good Reasons is a compact, attractive book that contains pertinent information, readings and assignment suggestions, and it is divided into three main sections. The first section explains what an argument is and the many uses for argument. The second section has professional and student examples of various types of arguments with suggestions for writing assignments.  The third section focuses on visual aspects of argument.  A useful appendix and a complete index are also included.

The authors, Lester Faigley and Jack Selzer, begin Good Reasons with a definition of “argument,” which is, of course, a very good place to start; then, they continue by giving examples of subjects for argumentation.  One of the exercises encourages students to read arguments with a pencil in hand, making notations in the margins for later analysis.  This form of exercise helps students understand the structure of argument and builds writing power.  While proceeding through the next chapter, I discovered what constitutes a good argument and what is not an argument.  The important features of argument writing are placed on a gray background and tips are set off with icons, making the book user friendly.

Next, Faigley and Selzer remind the readers to consider their audience.  At this point, some students may ask, “Why would anyone want to hear an argument, much less, read one?”  Most likely, they have not read the first chapter where “argument” is defined because if they had, they probably wouldn’t be trying to argue this point.  However, to calm these student’s anxieties, Faigley and Selzer give examples of the many instances where the ability to write an argument is invaluable, and they even provide blueprints with instructions of how to build the proper argument for numerous purposes.  They give examples by including Leslie Marmon Silko’s narrative argument,  “The Border Patrol State,” and a student’s evaluation argument, “The Diet Zone: A Dangerous Place.”  They have even included a definition comic strip, “Setting the Record Straight,” by Scott McCloud, illustrating there is more than one way to present an argument. By using Good Reasons, the students will discover many uses for argument and also the different types of argument.  Again, important features are placed on a gray background.

After explaining how to write an argument for any occasion, Good Reasonsoffers many suggestions for effective visual designs: photo placement, graphs, layout, visual theme, and directing the viewer’s eyes.  Additional information is given on how to form an effective web page so the students can ‘argue’ with the world.  These techniques are useful for all students, no matter what their major or intended line of work.

For students unfamiliar with research, documentation, and revision, Good Reasons has instructions on how to accomplish these tasks effectively.  The chapter on research explains how to find books, journal and trade articles, and other print sources; it also explains how to do research on the internet.  It includes a section that tells how to evaluate print and web sources, which is very important for the serious researcher.  The chapter on documentation discusses plagiarism and MLA documentation.  The chapter on revision leads the student through effective revision.  The appendix includes the rules for APA documentation, making the book applicable for students who may be in a field of studies that requires the APA documentation.  Finally, it contains a very complete index.

Before I leave you with the impression that I whole-heartedly endorse the reasoning behind Good Reasons, I want you to know I do not give the book my complete stamp of approval.  In the preface, Faigley and Selzer write they will not use the words “warrant,” “fallacy,” “syllogism,” or “enthymemes” (Toulmin’s terminology) in their book; instead, they use pathos, ethos, and logos, terms they feel are easier to understand.  I am not sure these terms would be any easier to remember than warrant, fallacy, syllogism, or ethymemes, the terms that are used more often in academia.  Besides, Good Reasons is crammed full of other terms that are used in relation to argumentation, so I don’t see a reason to make this change.  It seems this change in terminology could be very confusing for students if they continues taking writing classes and the next teacher is not privy to Faigley and Selzer’s terminology.

Overall, Good Reasons is a useful book because it is easy to understand, and it has concise instructions, marvelous photos and visuals, and text and pictures relating to current issues.  The book contains an added bonus: photos of many of the articles’ authors, which allow the reading audience to ‘see’ who is talking.  This, along with all the other unique features, is a good reason to giveGood Reasons  a thumbs up!

Two Strikes and You’re Out: The Impact of Executive Order #665 on Developmental Writing and Mathematics by Glen McClish

The California State University’s Executive Order 665, mandating all first-year students to complete their remedial or developmental course work in math and writing by the end of their first year or risk “disenrollment,” took effect in Fall 1998, a year before I arrived at San Diego State University as the new chair of Rhetoric and Writing Studies and General Math Studies.  In my new capacity, I inherited oversight of all developmental courses taught by the University, which means that I keep the gate that thousands of students will pass—or, in many cases, not pass—through to the second year of college and beyond.

Since I wasn’t on the job from the beginning of the Order, I was frequently witnessed to by more senior members of the Department and the University. The tale assumed biblical proportions.  For proponents of the Order, this is a story of accountability, of salvation from a remedial Babylon in which students squandered their educations and their souls by not facing up to their academic shortcomings.  665 brought them to the promised land of writing and mathematical competency in two short semesters, or—if they were not members of the elect—cast them out to wherever they will go—with considerable gnashing of teeth.

For opponents of the Order, the narrative harkens back to a lost Eden, a prelapsarian paradise in which students were allowed the time needed to get up to speed in these basic areas of education.  No panic, no arbitrary cutoffs and deadlines—just plenty of time to get the job done.  The one-size-fits-all mandate of 665 shook all the apples from the tree of knowledge, and a lot of rotten fruit hit us on the heads.  Cast from the garden to inhabit the world of 665—add one and you get the picture—they yearn for a lost innocence.

These stories are complicated by the fact that different institutions throughout the CSU treat those unable to complete remediation within the one-year limit differently.  Whereas at some campuses, a majority of these students are allowed to continue, at a school such as SDSU, only a very small number are permitted to proceed.  And what constitutes the first year also varies.  At some campuses, the summer after the first spring is an option.  At SDSU, however, the spring semester is the end of the line.  Some of our students, in fact, face an even earlier deadline.  Our administration mandates that certain local admits—who are eligible to attend the California State University but who have not met the higher SDSU criteria—must begin their remedial work in the summer and complete it by the fall.  To further complicate matters, students who come in as transfers operate under much more relaxed rules.  Although there are registration penalties for not completing remedial course work promptly, there is no threat of disenrollement.

Both versions of the 665 story have validity.  As those who decry the Order assert, students come to the University differently prepared.  In particular, students who hale from ESL backgrounds and/or from challenged high schools need more time to develop their basic competencies, a reality that EO 665 ignores.  It is no surprise that the ethnic diversity of our developmental courses is particularly rich.  665 pushes such students into a speed-learning routine inappropriate for true mastery.  Students who require three semesters to get up to speed in math are especially vulnerable, because the timetable allows for only two.

The scheduling associated with 665 is challenging because every student must be placed, yet sections must not dip below the breakeven point.  Thus, unless you schedule exactly the right number of sections at just the right times, you’ll have unplaced students—who complicate the one-year probationary period and infuriate administrators—or unfilled classes—which are expensive and infuriate administrators.  The only way to achieve the golden mean is to complete your hiring of part-time lecturers at the very last minute.  Well into the first week of classes, in fact, I’m still compressing classes here and adding them there.  Such manipulations are stressful and time consuming for staff and unaccommodating for part-time lecturers, who do not deserve living with such uncertainty.  Despite my best efforts to communicate to my faculty the inevitability of such scheduling, I know many of them are convinced I’m feckless.  I don’t blame them, but I hate to see their morale diminish, and my credibility in the process.

On the other hand, the old way, which allowed for easy scheduling of classes and which gave students virtually unlimited time to pass basic math and writing courses, encouraged procrastination and half-hearted efforts.  Why be saved today?  There’s always tomorrow.  Many students who put passing their remedial courses off until the last minute conduct their educations backwards, putting the basic competencies last.  Clearly, this makes no sense to anyone but them.  Scaring the hell out of people has its rewards.

Aside from learning to tell stories, I have gleaned a few lessons from my experience with the Beast.  First, I value the close ties with my counterparts in developmental math.  The historical accident that caused SDSU’s basic math courses to reside in the same administrative unit as its writing courses has allowed us to share information, strategize together, console one another, commiserate, and to build mutual respect.  If you find yourself in a similar institutional situation, I recommend establishing ties with your allies across the disciplines.

Similarly, I’ve learned the benefit of linking developmental writing administration with university-level writing courses.  Because all our writing programs call our department home, our staffing flexibility increases, and we’re able to share knowledge and resources.  For example, we’ve created a special hybrid course that allows students who narrowly miss placement into a university-level writing course to fulfil their debt to remediation and complete the first semester of university writing simultaneously.  My experience at SDSU has persuaded me that most efforts to divide writing programs are misguided.

I must also tout the recent growth in university-high school partnerships designed to enhance pre-collegiate curriculum.  Our instructors have been increasingly involved in the local high and middle schools.  The official goal of such collaboration is improved test scores, but I’m far more excited about broader, less tangible results.

Whether the current order is viewed as heaven sent or devilish, it is the Gospel of self-reliance that resonates most clearly—the simple fact is that this University and others like it help those who help themselves.  My gifted, highly dedicated math and writing instructors every day impress me with their commitment to developmental students and their special needs, but the system in which we function requires students to take control of their educations.  Surely academic preparation predicts success, but the single most important variable is student willingness to assume responsibility.  Every semester, bewildered, angry students—sometimes led by their parents—storm into my office and ask me what I’m going to do to fix their lives.  Ultimately, I turn the question back to them:  “How will you solve your problem?  The university has bet you a college degree that you can’t develop basic competencies in one year.  Here are your options—are you willing to act?  Take the reins, or they will take you.”

Space by Matt Costello

A silence unhampered by wind.
Birds hovering at the feeder.
You do not move,
are afraid to move.
Everything has converged
to form a teetering balance.
If you move, or even breathe,
the birds fly away, the branches stir
as if shaken by a current of air.
So you don’t move.
The birds eat at will.
The chair strains not to squeak beneath you.
You think the birds look at you,
but they are only looking for movement,
which you’ve sworn to yourself
you would not provide.

And then (something)
slams into your life.
It doesn’t make the birds flinch,
but inside you something new
has come to live,
where before there was
a space no one imagines is there,
at least not as easily as

hard disk C: type: 47 dot com
main processor, floppy drive A:
browse without moving, serial ports
www dot 80 more megs:

enough to fit your life in,
and the lives of all your friends.
your belongings: a bed, a table,
a television, even the books
were stacked and set inside,
and it was like you had just
laid the first brick of a wall
that until then you did not know
you were going to have to build.

The birds are feasting
and constantly on watch.
Nothing will fool them,
but this new event
has branded in you an unknown place,
and becomes the first thing
you store away there.
It is your aunt, dying.
You didn’t know her that well.
This is the first thing.
There is a lot more space.
The birds will never end up there.
They are twitching ravenously.
They are risking their lives.
They have heads of statues.
They fly away in fear.
They have been through this before.

Review – Rereading America: Cultural Contexts for Critical Thinking and Writing by Lisa Stahl

A lot has changed in the last 25 years.  In 1976, Richard Ohmann reviewed 14 textbooks typical of those used for teaching freshman composition (as referenced in Lester Faigley’s Fragments of Rationality: Postmodernity and the Subject of Composition).   Ohmann found these textbooks instructed students exclusively on writing skills and techniques to the exclusion of any analysis of culture.  He wrote that “these textbooks teach writing in ways that reproduce the status quo…divorce writing from society, need and conflict, and break writing down into a series of routines” (132).

The textbooks produced in the last 10 years arise as a seeming backlash to Ohmann’s criticism.  It appears we have swung to the other extreme with books that teach critical thinking without mentioning any writing strategies.  An example of this extreme is Rereading America: Cultural Contexts for Critical Thinking and Writing.  In its 5th edition, this “best selling thematic reader” is organized around 6 dominant myths of American society: family, education, the American Dream, gender, the melting pot, and the frontier.  Its aim is to explode these myths and encourage students to interact with society’s assumptions and embrace the inherent conflict contained in questioning these assumptions.  Each section offers a selection that represents the traditional myth being explored (for example, Horace Mann discussing education, Horatio Alger from Ragged Dick on success, Alexis de Tocqueville on gender equality issues).  Then, by contrast, it offers powerful stories and essays that undermine these myths (for example, E.J. Graff, “What Makes a Family”, Susan Faludi, “Girls Have All the Power: What’s Troubling Troubled Boys”, and N. Scott Momaday, “The American West and the Burden of Belief”).  This juxtaposition is useful because it grounds the student in the text that support the myth before offering alternative views.

In its preface for instructors, the authors indicate that the book contains issues that “speak directly to student’s experience and concerns.  Every college student has had some brush with prejudice, and most have something to say about education, the family, or gender stereotypes they see in films and television.”  While I’m not convinced every student has had

some brush with prejudice, after reading the selections these authors provide in this reader, I am confident that every student should read the selections it offers and ponder the questions it raises.

Another effective strategy of this textbook is its use of visual images that ask the students to “read” the visual texts and incorporate the messages represented into their thinking about each of the 6 myths.  The authors effectively integrate comic strips, recent advertisements and even Norman Rockwell paintings.

In the introductory essay to the student entitled, “Thinking Critically, Challenging Cultural Myths: Becoming a College Student” the authors define a critical thinker as “an active learner, someone with the ability to shape, not merely absorb, knowledge” (2).  This new definition sets the course apart from their high school experience where most students were simply asked to read and regurgitate content on exams.  The essay suggests that the students pre-read and pre-write before each assignment because “writing about what you’ve read will give you a deeper understanding of your reading.” (11)   This instruction about writing as a heuristic is a hopeful beginning, but alas, is not developed further.  The authors also suggest the students mark the text and take notes as “the best readers read recursively” (15).  Again, this is good advice, but the connection to writing recursively is not made.  Finally, the authors suggest that the student keep a journal whether or not the teacher requires one, because a journal “is a place to free write without worrying about correctness.”  These examples from the textbook illustrate the authors’ approach to reading but never draw the connection to writing for the students.

In fact, the main problem I have with this reader is the fundamental lack of writing instruction in its text.  Although it purports to be “designed for first year writing and critical thinking

courses”, it only accomplishes the first half of that claim.  The readings offered and the questions it asks the students to explore about American myths and cultural concepts are structured for in-depth critical thinking, an important part of a solid college education.  It is the absence of actual writing strategies that is discouraging.  In the backlash to rhetorical textbooks which focused on process, like The St. Martin’s Guide to Writing (second edition, 1988), composition readers have swung completely in the other direction.  Even in the instructor’s guide contained within Rereading America, teachers are guided on topics such as building trust within the classroom and how to handle “hot topic” issues.  There is no instruction on how to incorporate rhetorical writing skills, how to design titles, lead sentences, build cohesive paragraphs, utilize appropriate evidence, etc.  If we are to teach our students both critical thinking and writing skills, we are left with two choices: writing a new textbook which incorporates writing skills instruction utilizing challenging reading material, or accept that whichever textbook we choose for our classrooms will have to be supplemented with other sources.

Bakhtin’s Polyphonic Novel and the Polyphonic Potential of David Mamet’s American Buffalo by Jennifer Young

The theatre is the obvious place…for [Bakhtin] to have made a stronger contribution, or at least a logical place to go to further discriminate his own set of categories, and he didn’t do it…It is a mystery.  I don’t understand it…This is a topic that needs a lot of work; I hesitate to even talk about it.  But if one were to talk about an agenda for future work, I think that Bakhtin and theatre constitutes a very rich area (Barsky and Holquist, qtd. in Joki, MBD 2).

When Mikhail Bakhtin created the genre he called the polyphonic novel, he simultaneously hailed Dostoevsky as its father and rejected the drama as being incapable of sharing its multivoicedness.  In his Problems of Dostoevsky’s Poetics, Bakhtin explains why the drama cannot be polyphonic.

The speeches in a dramatic dialog do not disrupt the world that is being depicted, nor do they make it multileveled; on the contrary, they require the monolithic unity of that world in order to be truly dramatic.  The world of the drama must be made of a single piece.  Any weakening of the monolith leads to a weakening of the dramatic effect…True multileveledness would destroy the drama, because dramatic action rests upon the unity of the world and is incapable of tying together and resolving multiple levels.  In the drama the combination of integral fields of vision in a unity which stands above those fields of vision is impossible because the dramatic construction offers no support for such unity.  Therefore the true dramatic dialog can play only a quite secondary role in Dostoevsky’s polyphonic novel (13-14).

Bakhtin has both received kudos and endured backlash for his exploration of Dostoevsky’s polyphony at the exclusion of the drama.  In her essay “Marginalizing Drama:  Bakhtin’s Theory of Genre,” Jennifer Wise notices how Bakhtin praises Dostoevsky for constructing his novels with a polyphonic texture, but she reveals how these traits Bakhtin so admires actually originate from the drama.  Wise explains that Bakhtin’s analysis is built upon “a phenomenology of performance,” and that his assertations about novelistic discourse arise from “dramatic metaphors:  the novelist “stages” discourses, “performs” cartwheels and lazzi, “improvises” outside his script; the novelist is said to abandon any unmediated language of his own and speak only through the mouths of others, like a “playwright” (21).  Beyond pointing out this paradox, Wise also is infuriated by the manner in which Bakhtin simultaneously ascribes “the anti-literary energies of theatrical culture to the novel,” while “he perversely  withdraws them theoretically from the theatre itself” (19).  As she searches for possible rationale for Bakhtin’s privileging the novel over the drama, she finds a possible answer within his cultural poetics:

As Pushkin observed as far back as 1837, Russia had really never known a genuinely popular theatrical tradition, and during the Revolutionary and Stalinist periods of Bakhtin’s authorship, the emergence of an unofficial theatrical art was especially unlikely (21).
Bakhtin himself concedes that his definition of polyphony is purposely vague and meant to be merely “a graphic analogy, nothing more…music and the novel are too unlike for there to be more than a figurative analogy, a simple metaphor, between them” (PDP 18).  As Morson and Emerson articulate in Mikhail Bakhtin:  Creation of a Prosaics, “Polyphony is one of Bakhtin’s most intriguing and original concepts,” and what makes it even more enigmatic is that he never fully defines the term.  Morson and Emerson admit that even if Bakhtin’s definition of polyphony was less questionable, it is still inherently confusing because the concept is “deeply counterintuitive.”  Furthermore, they state that “Bakhtin was quite aware of its strangeness, and his method of presentation may have been an ill-considered strategy to preclude the misunderstanding that he correctly anticipated” (231-32).

This is one such problematic moment in Problems of Dostoevsky’s Poetics in which Bakhtin attempts to describe, and yet not precisely define, the background that gave way to his new genre:

The objective complexity, contradictoriness and multivoicedness of the epoch in which Dostoevsky lived, the situation of the non-noble intellectual(raznochinec) and social outcast, the profound biographical and inner involvement in the objective multileveledness of life, and, finally, the gift for seeing the world in interaction and coexistence—all these things prepared the soil out of which grew Dostoevsky’s polyphonic novel (25).

Some scholars such as Amy Mandelker and her troupe that assembled Bakhtin in Contexts: Across the Disciplines now have become so exasperated with the tired, ‘automatized’ phrasepolyphony that they refer to it as a ‘flattened-out catchword’ of Bakhtin’s, as meaningless asdialogue, chronotope, and the carnivalesque, which “now anesthetize us rather than communicate a concrete point of view” (4).  Now I hope to refresh the concept of polyphony by explicitly defining it according to its rightful musical terms, and by breaking down its components using as my illustration the playwright David Mamet’s American Buffalo.  I will show how Mamet composes his drama with rhythm, meter, and beats in mind, analyze his use of musical elements such as repetition and imitation to pass subjects and themes around, point out how he separates characters into treble and bass clefs for melody and harmony, and how his piece resembles a polyphonic-textured fugue.  As I do this, I will refer back to Bakhtin’s terms and ideas and clarify their relevance.

First of all, what exactly is musical polyphony?  A piece of music that is polyphonic (or contrapuntal) contains two or more melodies of nearly equivalent importance that are harmonically connected but still maintain their linear uniqueness.  The melodies are slightly different but explore a complementary theme.  A polyphonic-textured fugue is written for two or more parts with a set number of voices that develops a subject contrapuntally.  Fugues for three voices or instruments are most common (Miller 165).  A good example of a fugue is “Toccata and Fugue in D Minor” by Johann Sebastian Bach.  According to Bakhtin, for a novel to be polyphonic, it must contain “the plurality of independent and unmerged voices and consciousnesses” (PDP 4).  A fugue does not have a fixed form but varies from composer to composer.  Nearly every fugue does, however, begin with an exposition, in which a voice introduces a subject and asks a question that is answered by a second voice.  The second voice’s answer is an imitation of the first voice’s subject, but is written at a slightly different pitch.  Secondary voices follow with further developments and alterations of the original subject, ending the exposition, and leading into other sections called episodes.  Episodes are transitions in which there is no subject.  At the end of an episode, a statement of the subject with a key change occurs.  The fugue is perpetuated with other subjects that build upon the original in different keys and move the fugue toward a climax and finally, a resolution (Miller 165-67).

Out of all Mamet’s plays, American Buffalo most resembles a fugue.  Dennis Cunningham sees it as “very like intricate music, a wonderfully profane fugue…a song.”  David Skerritt calls the play  “A Fugue for Three Voices in a Junk Shop” (qtd. in Dean 110).  Just as Bakhtin’s polyphonic novel involves multiple voices exploring a common theme, so does Mamet’s drama contain various subjects of conversation that are passed between three characters:  Don, the junkstore owner and mentor of Bob; Bob, “the kid,” Don’s ward; and Teach, a poker-playing friend of Don’s. No character is more important than the others in the three-man show; they each make up equal parts of a trio.  Together these men, like musical parts, explore themes through repetition and imitation.  As Morson and Emerson explain, “Polyphony demands a work in which several consciousnesses meet as equals and engage in a dialogue that is in principle unfinalizable” (238-39).  Bakhtin says Dostoevsky’s heroes enjoy a “plurality of equal consciousnesses” and they are “not only objects of the author’s word, but subjects of their own directly significant word (neposredstvenno znachashchee slovo) as well” (PDP 4).

In Mikhail Bakhtin, Clark and Holquist explore Bakhtin’s ideas about folk culture, “the culture of the lower orders, of the fair tent and the marketplace from which come his three heroes, the rogue, the fool, and the simpleton” (272).  Defining Mamet’s characters inAmerican Buffalo by these terms results in Teach as the rogue, Don as the fool, and Bob as the simpleton.  Furthermore, these men are all both heroes and listeners.  As  Voloshinov and Bakhtin explain, language is inherently social and dialogic, and involves the author, the hero, and the listener, as well as the addressee and the superaddressee  (Joki, MBD 2).  Don and Bob are the first and second voices of the fugue.  Through their student-teacher relationship, they introduce subjects of  business and friendship in the fugue’s exposition. Bob’s voice echoes that of Don’s since he follows Don’s lead and rarely comes up with an original idea.  When Teach arrives, he modulates the play to a new key.  He bursts into the store and exclaims, “Fuckin’ Ruthie, fuckin’ Ruthie, fuckin’ Ruthie, fuckin’ Ruthie, fuckin’ Ruthie…Fuckin’ Ruthie…” (9).  This is an example of Mamet’s use of repetition.  Phrases and melodies or words are repeated over and over again so we remember them and think of them as significant moments in the piece.  He sprinkles repetition throughout American Buffalo, most noticeably again at the top of the second act, when Don mutters, “Great.  Great great great great great” (59).  Another musical term that stems from repetition is imitation.  In music, this is when a melody or part of a melody is repeated by another voice or instrument part (Miller 55).  Translated into “Mametspeak,” imitation is when one character repeats more or less what the other character just said.  For example, take this scene in American Buffalo:

DON:   How are you getting in the house?
TEACH:   The house?
DON:   Yeah.
TEACH:   Aah, you go in through a window they left open, something.
DON:   Yeah.
TEACH:   There’s always something.
DON:   Yeah.  What else, if not the window.
TEACH:   How the fuck do I know?
   Pause.
   If not the window, something else.  (1.49-50)

Mamet’s words are sometimes so technical the beats are as predictable as a Ping-Pong match. In the following scene, Mamet’s three characters go from single beats to alternating between duple and triple meter, and finally to a change in rhythm altogether.

BOB:   Yes.                                                    (Single meter)
TEACH:   Why?                                           (Single meter)
BOB:   Because.                            (Duple meter)   Pause.
TEACH:   I’ll see you tomorrow, Bobby.     (Syncopation)
BOB:   Good-bye, Teach.                           (Triple meter)
TEACH:   Good-bye.                                  (Duple meter)
DON:   Good-bye, Bob.                              (Triple meter)
BOB:   Good-bye.                                       (Duple meter)
Pause.  BOB exits.
DON:   Fuckin’ kid… (2.67)                       (Syncopation)

Change in rhythm, or syncopation, is characteristic of jazz music and polyphonic-textured fugues, and it is easy to spot in American Buffalo (Miller 27).  Mamet italicizes words that are to receive primary stress in order to indicate the rhythm of a scene.  Italicized words are clues as to how lines should best be delivered and ensure that the text moves along at a steady, pulsating pace.  In David Mamet:  Language as Dramatic Action, Anne Dean notices how “the rhythms and syncopations of Mamet’s language authentically reflect both the inner pressures of his characters and the pace and confusion of their urban environment” (31).  If actors do not obey the rhythmic technique Mamet dictates, they will destroy his poetry.  The musical rhythm conveys the communication (or lack of it) between his men.  To have the three men use simple and ordinary speech in his plays is not enough for Mamet, for the vernacular would be too sluggish and dull to articulate the duress his characters find themselves under.  Instead, Mamet elevates real and natural dialogue, altering spoken words into musical notes or lyrical verse with highly technical beats in order to reverberate the stress and anger felt by his men.

This idea of elevated dialogue that shares both traditional and defamiliarized characteristics is addressed by Bakhtin in “The Prehistory of Novelistic Discourse.” When discussing Hellenism’s polyglossia, he shows how this “powerful and illuminating model of other-languagedness…turned the direct word of barbarian peoples—their epic and lyric word—into a discourse that was somewhat conventional, somewhat stylized” (141-42).  Mamet, too, is representative of such a blend of the ordinary and the extraordinary.  Just as Bakhtin shows how Hellenism served as a springboard for the “parodic-travestying double discourse” and Roman laughter, Mamet also distances his dialogue from rigid reality and allows a multitude of ideas to be expressed.

Here is an example of Mamet switching a regular rhythm in favor of an irregular metric scheme to convey tension within his characters:

DON:   I’m going to have Fletch come with us.
TEACH:   Fletch.
DON:   Yes.
TEACH:   You’re having him come with us.  (1.50-51)

When a word is to receive even more prominence than a stress can give, Mamet extends the letters.  This tactic is like a composer placing a fermata over a note to signal the holding out of a note.  In the second act of American Buffalo, Teach says, “Aaah, fuck.  I’m sorry.  I spoke in anger.  I’m sorry, I’m sorry  (Everybody can make mistakes around here but me.).  I’m sorry, Bob, I’m very sorry” (65).  This line contains several musical elements.  Mamet places a fermata over the word “Aaah,” uses repetition to convey Teach’s apology, and indicates that his volume should change when he speaks the words bracketed in parentheses.

The pauses that abound in Mamet’s plays (and originated with Pinter and Beckett) are examples of musical rests and cadences.  Rests are symbols that denote brief moments of silence.  Cadences last even longer, signifying not only silence but a conclusive end of a phrase (Miller 49).  For Mamet, this would indicate a pause followed by a change in intention by one of the characters.  The three types of pauses inAmerican Buffalo are:

 

1.      TEACH (Pause):   Don’t send the kid in.  (1.33)

2.      TEACH:   What are we saying here?  Loyalty.

Pause.  (1.33)

3.      TEACH:   “You set it up with him.”…You set it up and then you told him.

Long pause.

DON:   I gave Earl ten percent.  (1.36)

 

The first pause is like a musical rest in which Teach takes a quick breath and continues speaking.  The second pause is longer than a rest; it is a way for Teach to redirect his focus and to try a different tactic of manipulation.  The third pause occurs only once in the play; it is when Teach is planting seeds of doubt in Don’s mind about his friends.  Don takes a long pause before he speaks because he is allowing  Teach’s poisonous words to sink in.  InMamet, Bakhtin, and the Dramatic:  The Demotic as a Variable of Addressivity, Ilkka Joki suggests that Mamet’s pauses are key elements in which to uncover his stylistic intentions:

In Mamet, language should always be the starting point for analysis, but a vital interest also relates to what he leaves non-verbalised, and to what might be described in Russian Formalist terms as an estrangement (or de-familiarization) of everyday reality…In more Bakhtinian terms, the estrangement in Mamet is a carnivalization of realistic dialogue.  In one sense, Mamet may even be said to be carnivalizing himself (21).

The episodes in a fugue are concluded in cadences, just as Mamet’s characters discuss a topic, settle it, and move on to another.  In one sense, the episodic phrases in American Buffaloserve as important events that carry the story a stage further.  In another sense, they are nonsensical events that trap the men into a never-ending and circular dialectic web, devoid of meaning.  Through such musical cadences and turn taking, Mamet shows how language fails his characters and adds more confusion to their pathetic hamster wheel existences.  So many times in American Buffalo, Teach, Don, and Bob misunderstand one another because they are not equipped with the tools to express themselves properly.  It is both tragic and hysterical to hear the men mutter such nonsensical sentences as “Cocksucker should be horsewhipped with a horsewhip,” “Action talks and bullshit walks,” and “You make life of garbage.”

In “The Prehistory of Novelistic Discourse,” Bakhtin addresses such “appropriating of another’s discourse and language” in the Middle Ages in ways that can easily be compared to Mamet’s men in American Buffalo:  “The boundary lines between someone else’s speech and one’s own speech were flexible, ambiguous, often deliberately distorted and confused” (145-46).  Regarding the characters’ violent interaction with one another, Bakhtin exposes this ‘marketplace speech of praise and abuse as false, stereotyped, narrow, and especially incomplete’ because of its ‘intimate and frank familiarity’ (qtd. in Joki, MBD 88).  In his essay The Dialogicality of Grotesque Realism, Joki examines how Mamet’s characters appear to be on familiar terms but are in actuality far from it:

For male characters this kind of bonding through the carnivalistic demotic is sometimes possible, but only under exceptional circumstances.  Such positive, open familiarity is not very common in Mamet, as there are so few fully realized human relationships between his characters.  Most often, verbal abuse retains its uglier face…Don and Teach use abusive speech genres constantly.  Although [Mamet] labels Teach as Don’s ‘friend and associate,’ there is little extreme familiarity between them.  This is an ironic commentary by Mamet on the nature of business, which correlates with egoism.  Both Don and Teach maintain that when they are talking business friendship has to be set aside.  Because the ‘business’ between Don and Bob is very small, familiarity and a touch of friendship may enter into their interaction more easily—but on Don’s terms.  This means that absolute demotic familiarity does not come about between Don and Bob.  The use of demotic language is subordinate to the power structure existing between the three of them (89-91).

Though Teach, Don, and Bob do not have enough words in their vocabulary to properly express themselves, they are nonetheless expressive in spite of their shortcomings.  These men communicate through the musical rhythm of their words, as Mamet illustrates:

My main emphasis…is on the rhythm of language—the way action and rhythm are identical.  Our rhythms describe our actions—no, our rhythmsprescribe our actions.  I am fascinated by the way, the way the language we see, its rhythms, actually determines the way we behave, rather than the other way around (Dean 16).

Teach is the impetus for much of the melodic line of American Buffalo.  Like Iago in Shakespeare’s Othello, Teach raises suspicion in Don’s mind about his surrogate son Bob’s ability to handle an upcoming robbery.  While he manipulates Don, Teach takes over the leading melody, supported by Don’s harmony.  Teach assumes the treble clef high notes while Don takes the low notes in the bass clef.  Teach usually controls the melody, which is can be either high or low.  Don will occasionally take charge of the melody, but more often than not adopts the harmony.  In this early scene, Don listens to Teach and agrees with him, imitating his words and providing a steady beat:

TEACH:   Every goddamn thing.

DON:   Yes.

TEACH:   If I kept the stuff that I threw out…

DON:   …yes.

TEACH:   I would be a wealthy man today.  I would be cruising on some

European yacht.

DON:   Uh-huh.

TEACH:   (Shit my father used to keep in his desk drawer.)

DON:   (My father, too.)

TEACH:   (The basement…)

DON:   (Uh-huh.)

TEACH:   (Fuckin’ toys in the backyard, for chrissake…)

DON:   (Don’t even talk about it.)

TEACH:   It’s…I don’t know.

Pause.

You want to play some gin? (1.19)

 

This scene illustrates perfectly why David Mamet has been called “the Aristophanes of the inarticulate” (Kroll 109).  Teach, after convincing Don to take Bob out of the “business” transaction and to put him in his stead, arrives late.  Don is furious and tensely awaiting their impending robbery scheme.  The men trade themes around, exhibiting imitative polyphony and syncopated rhythms, and failing to comprehend one another.  Bakhtin would call this contrapuntal relationship “only the musical variety of broadly understood dialogical relationships” (PDP 36).

 

DON:   Do you know what time it is?

TEACH:   What?  I’m late?

DON:   Damn right you’re late.

TEACH:   I’m fucked up since my watch broke.

DON:   Your watch broke.

TEACH:   I just told you that.

DON:   When did your watch break?

TEACH:   The fuck do I know?

DON:   Well, you look at it.  You want to know your watch broke, all you

got to do is look at it.

Pause.

TEACH:   I don’t have it.

DON:   Why not?

TEACH:   I took it off when it broke.  (What do you want here?)

DON:   You’re going around without a watch.

TEACH:   Yes, I am, Donny.  What am I, you’re my keeper all of a

sudden?

DON:   I’m paying you to do a thing, Teach, I expect you to know where

you are when.

TEACH:   Donny.  You aren’t paying me to do a thing.  We are doing

something together.  I know we are.  My watch broke, that is my

concern.  The thing is your and my concern.  And the concern of

Fletcher.  You want to find a reason we should jump all over each other

all of a sudden like we work in a bloodbank, fine.  But it’s not good

business.

Pause.  (2.63)

The robbery plan gets botched up, Teach accuses Bob of lying, and the play reaches a violent and heartrending climax when Teach manages to turn Don against his most beloved young friend.  Musically, Teach’s tirade is described as the fugue’s climax, the musical and emotional high point of a melodic line.  The music modulates, or changes keys, and lines becomes faster and faster, as Mamet employs the technique of accelerando.  With Don now on his side, Teach viciously strikes Bob with a blunt object.  Don regrets allowing Teach to resort to violence, but truly believes that Bob betrayed him.  When Don concedes that his ward is a traitor, Mamet provides the stage direction “sotto voce,” meaning “with a soft voice,” and further adds to the mood of the music by placing his lines in parentheses to indicate a more introspective reading (94).  As Don sees his student lying on the floor of the shop, beaten and bloody, he receives news that Bob was in fact not lying after all.  The musical key turns minor here, as Don realizes he has been duped by Teach and has failed as a father figure.  Mamet explains that “because he [Don] abdicated a moral position for one moment in favor of some monetary gain, he has let anarchy into his life and has come close to killing the thing he loves” (Schvey 94).

Don then turns on Teach, punching him and blaming him for the violence, saying, “You have lamed this up real good” (100).  Teach trashes Don’s store, screaming out mixed-up clichés and not making sense.  His language has completely atrophied into mass media-induced jargon and unoriginal ideas; all that is left is an enumeration of his disappointments:   “My Whole Cocksucking Life.  The Whole Entire World.  There Is No Law.  There Is No Right And Wrong.  The World Is Lies.  There Is No Friendship.  Every Fucking Thing.  Pause.  Every God-forsaken Thing…We all live like the cavemen” (103).

Mamet elaborates on his musical, poetic, and sometimes absurdist language:

I was talking to my daughter last night, and she was (she’s about two), she was making a strange sound.  I said what are you doing?  She says, “I’m hicking up.”  I was talking to a cop in Chicago and he says, “Yeah, I was walking that blankety-blank over at the station house” (he was talking about some criminal).  And he says, “We’re walking across the street and I wouldn’t have cared if he got hitten by a cab.”  So it’s the same thing—where “hicking up,” “got hitten by a cab,” obviously that expresses…it’s poetic language.  It expresses the thought absolutely perfectly, unbound by the self-consciousness of the fact that the locution is not the correct English (Benson).

American Buffalo ends in much the same way as it began.  The student and teacher apologize for letting the other down, Don tends to Bob’s wounds, and life goes on.  The play is resolved and the fugue’s last measures reach the final cadence.

When American Buffalo premiered in the 70s, some critics panned it as “little more than a foul-mouthed exposé of the criminal underworld…a very thin slice of low life.”  Mamet retorted with, “In this country, we only understand plays as dope, whose purpose is anaesthetic, meant to blot out consciousness…A play which does not soothe or reinforce certain preconceived notions in an audience…simply baffles [us]” (Dean 107-8).  NowAmerican Buffalo is considered to be a classic in American theatre, and David Mamet has joined the ranks of Albee, Shepherd, Williams, and Miller as one of America’s foremost playwrights.  Novick elaborates on Mamet’s impressive technique:

Mr.  Mamet has not tried to make poetry out of the way [his characters] talk…: he has made music instead.  That is, he has not tried to work up his crummy lowlifes to the point where they are inspired to give eloquent descriptions of their experiences and beliefs, but he has developed the rhythms of their lassitude, their bitching, their rising excitement, their fear, their negotiating, quarreling, cross-examining, with a subtle, beautiful dexterity that has to be heard to be fully enjoyed (qtd. in Joki, MBD 16).

Mamet’s dialogue is larger than life and more than merely street language.  As Dean puts it, “Mamet’s poetic and rhythmic gifts enable the language to become much more than dialogue—it  becomes the shape of the play itself” (15).  What is vital is not what is said, but how it is said.  Mamet’s words are rife with action when spoken in the proper rhythmic manner. Though the characters in American Buffalo don’t often venture beyond their claustrophobic junkshop, they are still highly active in their verbal exchanges.  Their lack of understanding for one another causes them to try even harder to communicate.  Since the men are so incoherent and tongue-tied, they must rely on the rhythm of their words in order to verbally joust and grasp at meanings.  In a musical, when a performer can no longer communicate through words, when speaking is no longer satisfactory to expressing true thoughts, it is time to sing.  A song’s purpose in a musical is to articulate what is being felt inside, to express what cannot be spoken.  Such is the case with David Mamet’s dialogue.  Quite amazingly, it transcends from words read on the page into music when performed.  David Mamet possesses the gift of making polyphonic fugues out of profanities.  Rumplestilskin-like, he transforms shit into gold.

One final aspect of Bakhtin’s polyphonic novel that must be addressed in relation to Mamet is the place of the author within a text.  Bakhtin’s ideal author of the polyphonic novel is far from neutral in his relationship to this image:  to a certain extent he even polemicizes with this language, argues with it, agrees with it (although with conditions), interrogates it, eavesdrops on it, but also ridicules it, parodically exaggerates it and so forth—in other words, the author is in a dialogical relationship with…language (PND 129).Joki notices how Mamet subtly finds his own place within his work:

Mamet criticizes and ironizes certain sociolinguistic and socio-ideological phenomena.  But as far as demotic man-and-man speech is concerned, although he criticizes some of its features and typical contexts and voices carrying it, Mamet participates in it without reserve.  He does not hide the fact that he is made of the same linguistic metal as some of his male characters. Therefore he is in a position to put the centralizing and decentralizing forces within street genres—genres which basically belong to disunifying forces—to the test from the inside.  He is capable of doing this without distancing or elevating himself above the level of such characters and the varieties of language they use, or at least not more so than is necessary for maintaining his overall speech plan for the artistic utterance (MBD 5).

Therefore, David Mamet’s American Buffalo does exhibit polyphony after all, though not in the same manner in which Bakhtin applied it to the polyphonic novel.  Whereas Bakhtin, who was censored and exiled and yearned for a multitude of distinct and valid voices, both those belonging to the author and to the characters, Mamet is politically freer but still seems to yearn for boundaries in the postmodern world.  Joki points to how both Bakhtin and Mamet have resided “in times of rapid cultural change, albeit in opposite directions” (MBD101). When Bakhtin speaks of many voices, he is thinking of the manner in which Dostoevsky juxtaposes contrasting viewpoints of persons from different social realms. On the other hand, Mamet’s men banter back and forth in a dialogue that can easily be deemed polyphonic, but these men are from a similar social strata.  This is the primary distinction between the different forms of polyphony—Bakhtin’s version and my own that is based in music.

Though Bakhtin rejected the drama on the grounds that it was incapable of being polyphonic, Booker and Juraga discover in Bakhtin, Stalin, and Modern Russian Fiction:  Carnival, Dialogism, and History that his “seemingly cavalier dismissal of the polyphonic potential of drama must be viewed in light of his suggestions elsewhere that essentially any genre can be infused with the spirit of dialogism and therefore “novelized” (15).  So perhaps Bakhtin did realize in his later writings the enormous potential for polyphony in the drama, though he never expressed it directly.  As Joki says, “drama, like the novel, can be dialogic; drama can contain several languages, independent voices, centres of consciousness which possess integrity, and multiple worlds” (MBD 216).  It is now time to reclaim the bastard child, the drama, and to include her as the final missing piece of Bakhtin’s elusive poetics

Music
Polyphonic-textured fugue for three parts (music with 2 or more melodies of approximately equal importance present at the same time that are harmonically connected but still maintain their linear uniqueness)
Mamet
Characters of equal importance conversing about various topics
Repetition (repeating phrase or melody over and over again to establish its significance) One character repeating himself or another character echoing back first character’s words
Imitation (form of repetition in which a melody or portion of a melody is repeated in another part) One character repeats another character’s words or phrases
Sequence (form of repetition in which same voice or instrument repeats the melodic idea using
slightly different pitches)
One character repeats himself with a new intention or rhythm or another character repeats what the first character said using slightly different words, rhythms, or intentions
Syncopation (change in rhythm) A character changes his stress to a new word, changing the rhythm and intention
Fermata (extended notes, duration of which is left up to the performer’s discretion) Extended letters to indicate holding a word out
Rest (brief moment of silence in which music stops so that performer may take a breath) Pause
Cadence (melodic or harmonic progressions that give the effect of closing a section) Long pause and change in intention
Melody (rhythmic sequence of single tones that make up a musical piece) Leading character
Harmony (combination and progression of chords in musical structure) Following character

 

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